KnightlyAngel09

Hello, hello.:) I'm Knightly, nice to meet ya. I'm not very good at reviewing works, honestly. Often, I just give my impression of the work, as a common reader and ...

Thanks a lot for the reviews. bf: Good luck sa Heights. KayC: Thank you very much for that. Shina: Hmm... I'll have to fix those up. Perhaps I did it ...

Hey Shina.:) Well, this poem meant two things to me.:) First, did you read any Enid Blyton books when you were younger? She has a lot of stories about toys ...

BF, pretty.:) haha. I love this. Flows so pretty pa. Like a heartbeat when you read it. Although in the last part 'more than they thought they should'. Should connotes ...

Hello. Second to the last stanza: fare should be fair Haha. I'm not sure if you are using reverse psychology or you aren't confident about this work but honestly, I ...

I cannot write you anymore, My golden pen has fallen; It faltered, shattered, breathed last, And now it's dead and barren. I wrote you pretty verses once, Of love and ...

This is a lovely, lovely poem. It reminds me of Stevenson's poetry. Pretty and sweet and beautiful, beautiful imagery. The ending is as Galerius says, quaint and pretty. oh, I've ...

Not in the progress sense of the idiom, Certainly, I see no progress in this— No progress at all in the choking city streets, that is home to that person, ...

hello.:) Brilliant, brilliant. I absolutely loved this. I agree with June. It does have and Edgar Allan Poe feel to it. Sort of like Annabel Lee. Another poet this reminds ...

No. Babies aren't products. They aren't some sort of factory produce. You don't minus and add stuff in order to make the babies "sell" or in this context "perfect". It's ...

Here, beyond the meadows green, Beyond the beauteous castles preened; Above the magic light of stars, Beyond the garish light of Mars; Here he said he’ll meet me. Here, upon ...

Hey darko.:) I haven't seen you around the site much lately. Anyway, on to the review. They come and go - trains: [s]with[/s] leaving no mark, [s]with[/s] leaving no stains, ...

Hello.:) For a poem with a really powerful image, as in lightning and thunder and destruction, I found it rather weak. The reason is that the words you use are ...

Hey.:) Okay, first, punctuation and proper capitalization would certainly help here. 'i' for example should be 'I'. Punctuation will greatly improve the flow of this poem. There are thirteen reason ...

Little light, you have no beauty, Thy prudent wick can have no grandure; Little light, you shine for no one, No lowly land or greater verdure. Little light, you useless ...