-
Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar
Haha. You are a giveaway.XD You have red hair and you're the chortest in your family.:) Right so far, I suppose?:)) I'm guessing you have green-ish eyes? Braces. Pretty smile.
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: Little Smiles
I aced my English honors project. Hard work payed off. I saw my High School bestfriend again today.:) I found a section in the library with Jane Austen's Sanditon.:) Finished ...
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: Organism
Hey Brendan. Beautiful, beautiful piece. Almost like the chant of nature to me. Your work again, blares out the characteristic strength of your words and imagery. Ok, I know this ...
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: The Guardians
Hello, hello. Nice to meet ya.:) I'm Knightly. Is this poem religious in essence? Not that it matters though. It just suddenly sprung to my head when I read the ...
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: Pain gained, Love lost
Hello, hello.:) Nice to meet ya. First of all, I would suggest you change the title. The title shouts out cliche to the reader. Pain gained, Love lost. It automatically ...
Sep 11, 2009 -
Re: Playing Clichés
BF!!!:) haha. I have to see you tomorrow. Ok. Review. I shall try. haha. But I love this. Cheers to levelheaded lovers.XD I can’t carry you in my arms forever ...
Sep 10, 2009 -
Re: I need a cigarette
I hold on to your smoke and strive to imprison it in my palms. I breathe it in deeply; to confine it in my chest— only to choke on Your ...
Sep 10, 2009 -
Re: A song for you
I shall play a song for you, To raise your kneeling soul; Tie you in my melody, And sing to keep you whole. Crumble not, I beg of you; Let ...
Aug 30, 2009 -
Re: Sonnet 2
Hello and welcome here.:) I loved this. The strength of your words is just amazing. Your touch disables my mind-it disarms my sense of right so that even to decide ...
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: Forgive my Absence
Hello, hello. The two cannots are confusing, I see. To explain it, the first cannot would describe the lines above it. The second is for the final line in the ...
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: Forgive my Absence
O my dear, how can I speak of being apart from you? The eyes know a hundred tears, and the soul has a hundred sighs. -Hafiz Did you think for ...
Aug 24, 2009 -
Re: Silence is Forever.
Hello.:) The silence of a generation, Cut off by the nation Of pain, love, and hurt, Rings for miles without once Meeting an ear- Brilliant beginning. It's strong and it ...
Aug 17, 2009 -
Re: I Am
Hello.:) Nice to meet ya. Your first poem, yay! Well, first, you need to fix your punctuation. It doesn't help this poem that you have a full stop after each ...
Aug 17, 2009 -
Re: Until the sunset fades
Sitting upon a weathered bench, We watched the sunsets fade; One by one the days ticked off ‘til only one remained. Today we shall jest with the sea, And punch ...
Aug 17, 2009 -
Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse
I think it's insane how much people love twilight. Edward and Bella are both obssessed freaks. Breaking Dawn was just plain disgusting. Yes, my dears, I actually read the whole ...
Aug 16, 2009
