KnightlyAngel09

Problematique It's like a problem, but unlike a problem, it can't be solved. The problematique of us human beings for example is that we strive to achieve so much in ...

Hey Amberchelli!:) I kind of like this poem, although I think it needs some more work. The end of a relationship is a common subject of poetry and it has ...

She: It is 6 in the morning and I cannot feel you on the bed beside me. My heart quickens, and my throat constricts. I shut my eyes tightly, afraid, ...

The way to get girls Sigh and stutter when she’s there, gaze at moonlight, grasp at air; talk of love all night and day, think of pretty things to say. ...

Hello.:) I'm Nixie! Hopefully, I can be of some help. I think that most of the points was covered by the first reviewer, but I'll see if I can say ...

It’s a shame, is it not?— That we did not love. Chances so fleeting, A nod from above. How foolish we were, To hope and to wait; Our half-hearted movement ...

And in the middle of the flood, I felt my worth/ When you hold on to me, like I was your little life raft/ Please know, that you were mine ...

I have found the paradox, that if you love until it hurts, there can be no more hurt, only more love. -Mother Teresa I have found the paradox said Mother ...

What’s a kiss worth these days? Nothing—spare change and lint. We’re throwing it away like worthless coins, Tossing it to the poor and needy— The needy, nameless lips in a ...

Great Expectations by Charles Dickens 'Cause I've only read two books by Dickens and I saw the movie and loved it.:) North and South by Elizabeth Gaskell For lovers of ...

Hello! First of all, I really like this. I think your use of an extended metaphor worked really well for you. There was such an understated sense of sadness in ...

Hey! I think this poem was okay. It wasn't anything brilliant but you had a few good points. Your rhyme scheme was really good and kept consistent throughout the whole ...

You will notice the odd punctuation. I did not mean for it to be correct grammatically. Punctuation, I believe, isn't strictly a grammatical tool in poetry. It was for a ...

Dear daddy, Remember that boy who took me to prom? Don’t be mad, but I admit that I felt a little proud of myself when he walked in the door. ...

Perhaps I’ll lift my pen today To write of plants and trees, Praise the Lord for his good works Applaud the birds and bees. Or maybe I’ll philosophize, Be smarter ...