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Re: A Lamentation on Singlehood
Nothing like a bit of a rant to brighten up a stormy day, eh? I’m not lonely. I’m not . Alright, 95% of the time I’m not, but the fact ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: You Are
Hello.:) I think it's a good effort to write something positive for a change. I've noticed that a lot of poems in the site have been taking a darker turn. ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Of Playgrounds and Playthings
Mark and Sally met in the school playground. He was six and she was seven and that meant that they couldn’t be friends. He pulled her pigtails and she pushed ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Tess of the D'Urbervilles
I loved, loved, loved Angel at first. And then... Lord. I think what struck me about the book was how different Tess' time is from ours. Angel just left her ...
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: Embracing Summer
What are we holding within our embrace? A fragment of heaven, marooned in this place. A tiny matchstick to begin with a spark, a small, warming fire to thaw our ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: Why I deserve this opportunity
Hey! Scholarship essays, nice! First of all, I really wish you luck. Since I think the reviewer above tackled a lot of the fine points of your essay, I think ...
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: Chocolate Morning
I began loads of fanfiction when I first began to write but I never finished them. This is the first I've finished and I'm glad it's about Remus and Tonks, ...
Aug 3, 2011 -
Re: Rainy Recollections
It was raining again. A small, sad sort of smile forced its way into his lips. He couldn’t help but think of her, though he knew that pining for her ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Tonight, In My Dreams
Hello! Cool! From a dream? That's awesome. My dreams are alarmingly incoherent and un-poetic. I had a dream once that my toilet bowl swallowed me. I have yet to write ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Do not speak of love
Do not speak of love, I beg, It is too much to bear; My love is far away from me, And oh! It is unfair. You see, he is a ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: Dear Period
Hello.:) I'd like to see what a boy would say about this. Haha. I can imagine them reading this and going 'huh'? I think it's absolutely wonderful that you're writing ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: Relief takes time
Hello.:) I think what this really needs something more tangible. You had a lot of attempt at imagery in the poem like being stuck, charcoal, chains-- something I suppose that ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Leave
Hey july4ruby!:) I think this is a topic which a lot of young people will be able to relate to. It's a painful topic, of course, and probably one that ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Triad
Hello, hello. I love this. This reminded me so much of my philosophy classes. I had an urge to answer all of the questions posed in this poem with Heidegger ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Summer and Winter
Inspired by North and South by Elizabeth Gaskell. If you have not seen the BBC mini-series (and you happen to love Austen/Dickens or period films in general) YOU HAVE TO ...
Jul 29, 2011
