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Thanks for the reviews :) I agree this definitely is not my best work.

I loved this :) Post more :)

Wow I really liked how you made the charcters emotions clear. This is a really good story, I loved loved loved it!! Lol im a sucker for love storys. :)

Wow. this was really well written. You have a really good way with describing a characters emotion and getting a reader hooked. I'd love to read more of this.

I really liked the mid-evilish setting. Great Job :)

I have over 3 versions of this story. I can't read my writing, it drives me crazy. I wouldn't say that this is an edited version of my previous post ...

There are some grammar and spelling issues in this. I love it though, I like how Rosalie and Emmett adopted a son like Esme and Carlisle. Although I can't quite ...

Thanks for all the reviews :) This was kinda like my planner story, I was just writing random stuff. I made a longer version I'll be posting after editing some ...

This is a good story you have an interesting writing style. It's different sets you apart from other writers.

I layed across the backseat of Jake's car. Our honeymoon had to be cut short since I was apparently sick. I didn't know I could get sick I thought the ...

I love the details in this story. You have an excellent style of writing. :)

Few grammar mistakes but it is an overall good story.

I enjoyed this story, I wish it had a bit more descripiton in it