Kiwisatsuma

Oh, right, fair enough. :) I've heard it used as an adjective to mean happy, but I didn't think it could be a verb. Well, you learn something new every ...

Ooh, you edited it! I think it works much better and is much less info-dumpey with the compass scene put in earlier, and I really like the description you put ...

About the Kirja burning thing, I really don't know because I'm not sure what it is yet. XD It does seem to be important to Hail and the way he ...

Hey again :) Well, I finally reached my procrastination limits for the next couple of days :D I'm just gonna review chapter one because there don't seem to be any ...

Hey :smt001 Keyboard's finally working so here I am :D From the looks of things you've had quite a lot of in depth feedback on this which I haven't read ...

Thanks for the reviews! I'll bear in mind what people have said about changing stuff and smoothing out the prose. :)

Brendan Fraiser

Thanks for reviewing, both of you! :) You're right, it probably is out of character for Dr. Cox to be so nice to JD. I've made him into too much ...

No problem :) I haven't got much experience at reviewing so I hope I'm not doing too badly. The problem is, I'd have to have the king or the general ...