Kiwisatsuma

Hi! :) So, I read skimmed over the other version of this chapter, and I definitely prefer this one a lot. The spacing makes it easier to read, the pacing ...

Hi! Thanks for reading my story! :) So, I like this so far. I like the way the MC's personality comes through in so few paragraphs. Still, I do think ...

Wikipedia turned up these: :)

Hi! :) I liked this a lot. I like how familiar the tone of the letter sounds and how the narrator sounds so tender and affectionate but at the same ...

After I saw the video with Rebecca Black analyzing the lyrics to Friday. I decided she was pretty awesome. XD

So, this poem is trying not to be emo but I'm not sure it's managing very well..? Also, I'm not sure about all the switching from 1st person to 2nd ...

Hi! :D I really liked this. I love how creepy it got at the end, and how you hinted at what was to come with the bugs. That idea of ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! :D This is a really interesting start to the story. I love the idea of her going in the water and coming out dry, and there ...

Hi! :) This review is incredibly late. Sorry for being so rubbish at getting round to it. But anyway! I love the bit with the Masquerader being vunerable, and Rostoloff ...

So many books. *__* 'Looking for Alaska' is amazing. And I liked 'Notes on the Refridgerator Door' but I felt a bit cheated by it because it's about a quarter ...

Well, you know that there are two ways to pay: a £1 coin and a 50p coin, or three 50p coins. Therefore, the people who put £1 coins in must ...

I wrote this a while back in English class, when we had to write a sonnet including three lines from poems by other writers. I don't want to post it ...

Tammy! (I never know whether I should call you this now your name's changed) Your costume is amazing! :D

Josiah I stumbled around the deck, blinking. Smoke was pouring out from a hatch and sailors were yelling gruffly to one another. And - was that a charred tentacle lying ...