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  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Counting down the days till we're one

    This is really good! It feels incredibly genuine and that only makes it more powerful. Your description of waiting for a partner, for someone to love and the concern that ...

    Aug 20
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: The incident

    Hi! I really liked this. I think the structure of this story made it much more effective than if you had used a more traditional format. It also helped a ...

    Aug 20
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Home Sweet Gnome

    Hi! I want to start my review by saying how much I loved this! You did really great with the pacing and character work. The scene where Gunnar died and ...

    Aug 20


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