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KiwiGod

  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Counting down the days till we're one

    This is really good! It feels incredibly genuine and that only makes it more powerful. Your description of waiting for a partner, for someone to love and the concern that ...

    Aug 20
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: The incident

    Hi! I really liked this. I think the structure of this story made it much more effective than if you had used a more traditional format. It also helped a ...

    Aug 20
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Home Sweet Gnome

    Hi! I want to start my review by saying how much I loved this! You did really great with the pacing and character work. The scene where Gunnar died and ...

    Aug 20


You know that place between sleep and awake, that place where you still remember dreaming? That’s where I’ll always love you. That’s where I’ll be waiting.
— J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan