KitxKat

Dear all~ I guess this was exceptional. Just growing up with you. Remember when we first met? All timid newcomers on the first day of high school? There was Marcie, ...

There is nothing for me to be all critical about. Which is good. So that was basically wonderful. I love your description, word choice 'Luxuria' the way you started the ...

1 I stepped into the hazy, smoky bar and felt like I was transported through time. In my minds eye, I saw girls with high ponytails in poodle skirts, laughing ...

pretty in pink. (Pretty in Pink should be captiliazed.) Why would I say no. (Question Mark there) How did I not notice that something was wrong. How was I so ...

I know this is short, but Im trying out a new format, and not using speech here. So thanks in advance I never meant to do it. I never meant ...

'I would like to meet you today,’ Joe told me on MSN. This was to be our first date. 'Where?' I typed back. 'The beach, will you meet me by ...

At a glance, it seemed as if the walls that separated nightmares from reality had finally collapsed. The hiking trails were no longer just trails; they had turned into hunting ...

Hey SO this is definitely interesting, in a good way. Your description is strong, but I don't really feel the emotion. Maybe explain how she died? I totally wanna read ...

First of all, Welcome to YWS. I'm Kit, and if you haven't already, go to the welcome mat and introduce yourself. Now, onto your story- It's interesting. I think the ...

Obviously not as well written. I changed 'Fey' to 'Vârcolac-Strigoi' Attempt to enjoy ~Kit Jace took me away from the jail, away from the main city. The beautiful, glimmering lights ...

I am feasting. The kindle, twigs and sticks are my appetizer. The logs are my main course. Dessert lies forever out of reach. Here they come, timber in hand: coming ...

Hey! I have tendancy to be firm with my reviews. Sorry in advance Charisma and Dylan were complete opposites. Totally different. The only thing that they had in common was ...

YOU ARE MY NEW HERO!!! That had me ROFLMAO-ing and LOLcanoing and ROLFcoptering Thats how funny it was. I had to go with the text-abbrevations, Sorry about that. That really ...

This is something new I'm trying out Yes, I know there's a well-known character named Jace, and a species called Fey ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Fey. Strange and Ecc

This is my first song written in years. Its really based on something that happened to me So, yeah You’re who I think of as tears go by. You’re the ...