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Re: Right Now
I love you're topic. It's something everyone can relate to, and well chosen. The only thing is when I read this, I don't read a poem, I read a song. ...
Aug 14, 2010 -
Re: Hope Resides
The mirror is, shattered, into many, pieces. Each shard is like, a memory, lost beneath the, pain. Like a petal of a, rose, that lands upon, a candle. Though all ...
Aug 14, 2010 -
Re: The World is a Cruel Place
That was a really powerful poem. The emotion was strong and great, and the description was perfect. I found that it flowed well and and the stanza's were easy reads. ...
Aug 14, 2010 -
Re: Eternal Kiss
As snow dies to a fire, that runs blue, your white gown, pours burning love, on each skull. And among water-lilies, when the sap of the world, and the wine ...
Aug 14, 2010 -
Re: Fixed At Zero [Chapter Four - Draft]
“How are you feeling, Chloe?” The red-haired woman sitting in from of me asks, folding her hands over her notebook. I sew my lips shut and focus on the creaking ...
Aug 14, 2010 -
Re: Flawless (Working title)
1 It’s amazing what girls will do to be perfect. Even as a daydream. It was during lunch, and Lisa, Jamie, Courtney and I were looking through the latest Seventeen ...
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: The Imaginary Prologue
“Who are you?” I said in a low voice as a black figure lurking in the white space. She didn’t reply. She just stood there as if waiting for me ...
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: Forever Forgotten - Prologue
That was actually pretty good. It's was dark, and gloomy, and actually, pretty cryptic to read on a Friday the 13th, but I highly enjoy what (I think) you're trying ...
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: Scarlet Killer~2
This is a change of prescpetive. 1 In life, there are some things you regret, some you forget, and some you can’t get your mind off of. I was five ...
Aug 12, 2010 -
Re: Scarlet Killer~1
I feel like this is the first novel I've attempted to write that has publishing in it's future. For this reason, please be as hard as possible. Thank you~Kit The ...
Aug 11, 2010 -
Re: The Fallen Angel:Prologue
But, back to the original question. To consider it properly, means to consider all of the variables, the opposing theories. What if you can't physically die? Emotionally, perhaps, but not ...
Jul 21, 2010 -
Re: Cameron Girls~2
2 The eight seventeen year olds assembled in the library. We talk quietly, waiting for our headmaster to arrive. We sit in a row, ankles crossed elbows on the table. ...
Jul 21, 2010 -
Re: Cameron Girls~1
1 If there’s one thing we were told over and over, it’s that there will be pain, and we will die. If not in the field, but because of something ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Enough!
That was good. Like amazingly good. This main character is strong, plot is better then most things I've read. nothing for me to correct, which is good for me. So, ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Love Rollercoaster
I wrote this about a boy I met at a camp I just came back from. I wanted to try a lovey-dovey-gross-icky feel to it, so yeah. We met over ...
Jul 19, 2010
