KitxKat

Toast “If anyone else tries to breakdown that door they will.” Dante said worryingly. He examined the splintered wood barely supporting the chain. “What do we do with the body?” ...

“Jerry… how do you think she’s coping with the… situation?” Mom’s voice floats up the stairwell. I creep next to the stairs and strain to listen. I’m supposed to be ...

I like this. I could feel the emotions that you put into this poem. I find it strong , yet a little bit scred or soft. So, good job. ~Kit

Meeting the Medici David entered the fully furnished mansion carrying his sedated brother in both arms. He used his back to push the armoured front door shut before gently placing ...

3 I’m not exactly sure how I ended up here. I’m standing beside my father, wearing my fanciest dress. “Are you sure about this?” I ask again, “I’m not sure ...

Dear Daddy and Mom, As I looked around , I noticed a look of despair on a boy's face. I walked up to him slowly, so my waist length light ...

[0.00] I hear a door open but I can’t see it. The puppet strings of this body are cut and I can’t feel these hands. A towel slips itself around ...

Mr. Johns~ The chair was cold and hard, lines of dried scarlet blood staining the metal legs. The room was pitch black and dead quiet, the girl limp in sleep, ...

PROLOUGE Hi, I'm not too sure about this whole writing thing to be honest with you. Let's get that straight from the start- That sounds awkward. Instead say, "straight from ...

Prologue In a small Italian region surrounded by lush rural farmland bordered by forests within Tuscany, a 2008 Maserati GranTurismo silently broke free of the foliage and drove past two ...

I really, really like that. It's the way you put all your emotion into one poem, which I think is super sweet. I hope your girlfriend likes it too

2 I love my bedroom for a reason. It’s at the top of the house and I can ignore everything else in the house. I can hear a car pull ...

It is silly, yes, but it's really cute I like your flow and your subject matter Wait, how much did you say that was? Ahem... I think I'll go home ...

I really find this interesting. It's quite short, but I think something really good can come out of it.

That was simple and beautiful. I could practically feel everything the speaker is feeling. You're flow is easy to follow, with breaks in the right places. Congrats ~Kit