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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Neither docile nor timid thou art

    Neither docile nor timid thou art. Yet with your veritable tenacity you prevail upon my consciousness; an insistence in webbed corners and those always clean. Oh, Thief of all Thieves! ...

    Aug 17, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: .....

    Chapter One With only one more year of high school remaining, an Early Acceptance from Columbia University and a timetable for when I’d be able to make my great escape ...

    Aug 17, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Fixed At Zero [Chapter 6 - Draft]

    “Chloe, get down here, now!” Mom cries from the stairwell, less than an hour after our heated words. It’s strange though, because it usually takes her two or more hours ...

    Aug 17, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: David and Dante Chapter 3: Fighting With Demons

    There's the usual grammar/nit picky mistakes that can totally be found if you reread. Now,for some character relationships. Please, correct if I get anything wrong. David and Dante are brothers, ...

    Aug 17, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Flawless-4

    (A/N-For anyone who is following, I changed her name from Hanna to Emily) 4 I prefer being left alone, in times like this. I am, too. Caroline ditched dinner. I ...

    Aug 17, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: BloodLust - Prologue & Chapter 1 Part 1 [Edited]

    Hey Kit, Thanks for the critique, I really appreciate it *grins*. (The use of the word sentinels makes me think of Wolverine and the X-men.) Wolverine and X-men huh? Hmmm, ...

    Aug 17, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey, It's Just Me

    Welcome! I'm kit. Don't worry. I've ben writing since my seventh grade-and ever since

    Aug 17, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Read This Or Else - Mwahaha!

    Hey, Kat! (Has just learned this forum exists. Interesting.) I sing too! and I only, seriously wish I'm Filipina. I'm sort of jealous ~Kit

    Aug 17, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Chapter One part one and two

    If you were to walk into fourteen year-old Stephanie Sheppard’s room, you wouldn’t notice anything different. You would still see her blue walls and white carpet, her bed with the ...

    Aug 17, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: wrong choices

    This piece feels empty. It needs emotion. How would you feel if anyone called you those names? Keep that in mind if you expand on this. And tell me if ...

    Aug 17, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: BloodLust - Prologue & Chapter 1 Part 1 [Edited]

    BloodLust Prologue The stars were all that glistened in the sheet of darkness that prevailed above the wildlife surrounding the man. He made his way through the forest, disturbed by ...

    Aug 17, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Ticking Heart, Beating Clock

    Sweet sadist, the alarm clock that beats inside my heart Ticks away the minutes until we meet once more No sleeping pill, no shield of eyes would hold my slumber ...

    Aug 17, 2010
  • Other Re: What Happens As You Watch A Man Die?

    That was very strong, although short. You make up for the length by jam packing so many thoughts and emotions into those few paragraphs. Keep writing ~Kit

    Aug 17, 2010
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: The Dark Prison

    Dear Lucy, My heart aches whenever I think about you. I know I will see you soon, but it just seems so far away. It isn’t so bad over here, ...

    Aug 17, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Crimson Lullaby Chapter One

    Chapter One You are the only Exception The Lesson was going well. Well I'm sure the teacher thought it was going well, no one was loud, nothing was thrown and ...

    Aug 16, 2010


In a world too often governed by corruption and arrogance, it can be difficult to stay true to one's literary and philosophical principles.
— Lemony Snicket