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Re: Forever Forgotten - Chapter One
Chapter One: Take a deep breath. Hold it. Hold it. A little bit longer. Almost there. Just a few more seconds. Wait...almost...just a tad longer...and.....let it out. Feels good, right? ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: TarponVille High
Chapter One: Welcome To TarponVille High I could feel my heart pounding faster than my feet could hit the ground. A new school year and im already late. Thats what ...
Aug 20, 2010 -
Re: Oblivion
My dreams are haunted by nightmares. Images of terror and despair. I had one a few nights ago, about the world bombing itself, each country turning on the others, fighting ...
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: David and Dante Chapter 5: Poison
Impeccable grammer/spelling. Now a question. How old are David and Dante. I remeber from the first chapter that they are, well, old. So, the speech instance that I quoted doesn't ...
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: Spoiled (working title)
(This is the first time I've tried writing in first person since I was around eight years old What do you tink?) 1 The Miami sun gleamed off the hood ...
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: Heal. (Chapter Two)
A/N: For those of you who enjoyed and reviewed 'Heal.' (which is a working title) this is a short extract of her first day at school, it's only been edited ...
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: The Turtle and the Frog--Written at Age 10
You wrote this when you were ten? You had mad writing skills when you were ten! I love this! It is so adorable
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: David and Dante Chapter 4: Smoke
Smoke “Why did you even call him?” David asked his brother. “Diana had the car, why did you call Anton first.” Dante was caught by surprise. “Well… It’s just that ...
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: Kit in a nutshell
Palominos! I adore Palominos! I've been riding English for four years, I've also showed. I honestly don't think I'll find another instructor.
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: Kit in a nutshell
Yeah, totally. I'm pretty open minded. I really hate my instructor. Ugh. She just bugs me
Aug 18, 2010 -
Re: What Happens When You Die Looking Into Your Killer's Eyes?
When your death is being orchestrated, and you're looking your dominant foe in the eyes, do you wonder, "Why me?" or "Why now?" Today a man broke into my castle. ...
Aug 18, 2010 -
Re: Flawless~5
5 I wake up on Sunday morning to my mother gone, probably out work, or out with couple of friends. I shower quickly and go to the home gym, determined ...
Aug 18, 2010 -
Re: The August 17 to August 18 Twelve hour blackout
Yes! I literally cried when I couldn't get on last night. Glad to know it's faster, too!
Aug 18, 2010 -
Re: Kit in a nutshell
These things always make me seem so superficial. ~I'm fifteen years old. (December baby!) ~I've been writing since I'm thirteen (A terrible thing with an old friend drove me to ...
Aug 18, 2010 -
Re: Of No Return Ch. One
Welcome to the YWS! Go introduce yourself at the Welcome Mat if you haven't already done so. Now, on to the review I'm sad this is so short, because I ...
Aug 18, 2010
