KitxKat

Time had passed since my parents had gotten killed. I was a totally different person, who had to adapt to the harsh ways forced on me at boarding school. I ...

Prologue Where I come from, everything is gold. Gold crowns, gold necklaces, golden bars. Gold wasn’t me. Gold wasn’t my color. Every little girl dreams of being a princess. They ...

This is a follow-up to the first short write I wrote (Sydney) Enjoy! I can’t do this. I mean, I can’t tell my parents. Get a grip, Sydney I tell ...

Its me again. JoJo ran across the hallway to the girls' washroom. It wasn't exactly the cleanest bathroom in the world. The mirrors were cracked, and the paint on the ...

Beautiful title. THats really good. I'll use purple for grammatical things, and purple for nitpicks. ~Kit Stop the Masquerade Prologue On my way to class, I hurried through the school ...

Hey, Its KitxKat, or Kit. Really. Kit. I'm just review this for you. I don't usually write anything down, I use different colors. Purple for general comments and red for ...

Alright, Syd , I think, Just pee. It’s easy. And it’ll be negative . I sit on the closed toilet seat lid. It’s always come down. To the dramatic moment ...

Hey, Kerza! I'm KitxKat, or Kit, and Ill review your work. anything nitpicky is in purple, anything grammar is in blue. Chapter one “Oh, really?” I asked Vincent as I ...

This is interesting. I find the language usage too Shakespearian for my taste. It'd be harder for readers who haven't read any Shakespeare. It is an interesting Idea, though.

4 Bronwyn Jonathan pulled up to this…jail cell. Seriously. I have never seen Adams before, and it feels like I’m being taken to jail. The main building is huge and ...

the song I based it off ************************* I watched as he went off to war. No matter how much I begged him not to, but Darren never listened to me. ...

3 William New students. Two new students. Two new FEMALE students. This day can’t get any worse. I take my seat at the boys’ table. Around me, the rest of ...

2 Josephine Janelle takes us to her office. We sit in huge leather armchairs and stare at her. “Girls, do you believe in the old legends?” Bronwyn nods and I ...

Alright, I'm gonna be a bit harsh with this, I hope you don't mind. Introduction One girl was unaware of what was coming ahead for her. What was going to ...

Hey, I'm KitxKat, or Kat, as I'm trying to be known as, and I'm here to review your works. I feel like it went a tiny bit too fast for ...