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Re: Memories [Chapter 7]
This is getting very confusing. I think your moving to fast. Your emotions are getting to crazy, and I can't keep track of them. Slow right down. Remember to explain ...
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: Memories [Ch. 4]
Okay so, most of this chapter seems pretty random and unrealistic. If her parents her really in love, then it'd be at least a couple months before the father even ...
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
Not letting me post my work at ten fifty AM (Mountian time, I think.) I get this-'SQL ERROR [ mysql4 ] Out of range value adjusted for column 'cash_amt' at ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: David and Dante Chapter 7: Bad Blood
Wow, Okay. That was really sad. I absolutely have nothing to nit-pick, by the way. So, congrats and keep going ~Kit
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: Memories [Chapter 3]
You are moving really fast. Actually, during the first part, you have way too much dialogue and not nearly enough description. Slow it down. Do some describing. Also, Emily seems ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: I Must Have Missed the Important Part
Love it.
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: The Uber Writer's Block Thread
I hate my characters. Or my characters hate me They a;ways turn into selfish brats that I can't work with. I keep shutting these blocks, which makes me mad
Aug 27, 2010 -
Re: Which Famous Writer Do You Write Like?
Okay thanks. I just did it again, with a different peice of writing-Stephen King Yes. Right
Aug 27, 2010 -
Re: It Began with a Lump in the Throat
I am right with you at the poetry thing. Not my thing, but try it anyway. I'm sorry. I don't get the reference in your title. [quote=Sporkpunk]Ramblings of god and ...
Aug 27, 2010 -
Re: the drugs, the devil, and me
Firstly-if this is based on your own life, please get help. Right now. Secondly, I could only skim this because there are so many mistakes. Please message me after you ...
Aug 27, 2010 -
Re: Runaway~Prolouge, I guess
1 I stepped into the store and looked around. It bled normal. Mothers hurried their children along, trying to get out before they see something they really want to buy. ...
Aug 26, 2010 -
Re: The Things I Thought Before I Died: Part One
That was really good, and sort of bittersweet. I honestly wanted to cry when I read that, which is weird for me. Are you going to do a part from ...
Aug 26, 2010 -
Re: In Eachothers Arms
That was really cute. Seriously, I don't wanna say anything mean because it's so darn cute. So, congrats, and keep writing. ~Kit
Aug 26, 2010 -
Re: Mama, wake up!
Mama, wake up! “Mama, wake up.” Jasmine peered over the handle bars keeping her mama safely tucked in bed. She couldn’t see her Mama’s face good so she pulled the ...
Aug 26, 2010 -
Re: Pacific Bliss
Those are absolutely beautiful. Makes me long to go back to Caribbean. I loved the one with the setting sun. That was my favorite Again-beautiful ~Kit
Aug 26, 2010