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Re: Taking it back
Hi, I'm Erin. I think this story has potential, but it moves too fast. You should let us know more about your character, and how she is feeling, and less ...
Jun 16, 2009
Hi, I'm Erin. I think this story has potential, but it moves too fast. You should let us know more about your character, and how she is feeling, and less ...
Jun 16, 2009
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