Kitterz

Thank you for your review I will definitely take these things into consideration :]

Thank you :] The message that was supposed to be portrayed was that something was wrong with the princess and they knew they ought to have watched her. "She told ...

Change dickenson to dickinson lol

This is very straightforward and pushes it into your face it seems, which makes it a very powerful piece. I like the flow of it. Very nicely done.