Kitterz

Thank you for your review I will definitely take these things into consideration :]

Thank you :] The message that was supposed to be portrayed was that something was wrong with the princess and they knew they ought to have watched her. "She told ...

Boucherie Once upon a time, there was a princess but there was an accident We know she is wrong What's the matter? Here are flowers, take some. She said don't ...

Change dickenson to dickinson lol

I love your in line rhyme! I guess I'm not as poetically inclined as those who have commented before me, but I don't think any of this is kindergartenerish. Also ...

"You make me want to scream with agony, but you know I won't." Definitely my favorite part of this piece. I love the subtely of it. Reminds me of a ...

This is very straightforward and pushes it into your face it seems, which makes it a very powerful piece. I like the flow of it. Very nicely done.

Hey, My name is Katie Anne. I'm 17 and I just joined the site. I've been writing poetry, short stories, and novels since 8th grade. I've written two novels and ...