Kitkat_1122_

The only ones that I had answered "yes" to were: 3. Is your main character the heir to the throne but doesn't know it? Okay this isn't the main plot ...

Granted, but then there is a huge earth quake that your house gets crushed in. I wish I had a pink poney. (not really)

I tried to read the Artmis Fowl books but I stopped because I got confused and in my oppion it was boring.

It took me a minute to see him. At first I thought you drew a ghost, but then I tilted my head a bit and saw him. To me, its ...

fake

The last two lines don't seem to fit to me. Like the way I see it is that you talk about a part of the statue and then describe kinda ...

I'm not sure why I want to be an author if I don't like to write that much. I love reading so maybe that's why: I want to create a ...

I write in English because: 1. It's the language I grew up with 2. I don't know any other languages. And because of the second reason I couldn't really write ...

Granted, but now your house catches on fire because it was too hot. I wish that I had a non-poisonious cookie.

I would sudgest that you add a pattern or rhyming scheme, that way it would seem less random, which to me it seemed just like you could read it as ...

I really would like to write a book, but I noticed one small problem; I practically have to force myself sit down and write. I don't really like writing, but ...

I never thought there was a difference. If you didn't post that I probably would never have known. That's a good tip. :wink:

I think I'm one of those kinds of people who get the lying on the ground vs. laying on the ground mixed up. Thanks for mentioning that, I probably wouldn't ...

I don't really notice the tenses when I read, I just notice the narritves (first or third person).

I'll have to take a look at them. I have never heard of the author or the books.