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To be honest when I read part of Eragon (I never finished it for complicated reasons) I like it. Then when I joined YWS I saw a lot of what ...

Oh congrats on that positive response! Good luck getting your book published!

I'm not good with ideas so if you wanted new (and maybe outrageous) ideas I would suggest that you do this exercise: 1.) Ask someone to give you three random ...

Sometimes I can get really interesting ideas by doing this exercise: 1.) Ask someone to give you three random words that have no close relations to each other (like: cheese, ...

Each chapter should have a purpose to your story like introduce characters, include thematic elements, ext. You should try to define what each chapter's purpose will be early on when ...

I agree with what Shadow said. You should have a plan of how you wanted your book to be. I would only add things that would help enhance the plot, ...

I noticed that from the books that I have read that made me cry, the (like writersdomain said) the main character (or character closest to the one that died) feels ...

Yeah I read that too somewhere and so thats part of the reason I don't post my works here.

I agree with writersdomain; it seemed a little rushed. I couldn't really tell what the plot was, so maybe if you made your main character reflect her thoughts about the ...

I should try to critique more, but I find it hard with my busy scheadule. I'll probably critique more over summer break when I have the time. I don't really ...

Some of my friends have read Uglies and they said that they were really good and so now I'm just dying to read it...but the list at the library is ...

That's just sad and scary. One of my teacher's today pointed out that that amount of people was like some guy breaking into our school and killing everyone in our ...

These remind me of Starwars. =)

I like the colour picture because you can see the girl doing her yoga better than the black in white, which is hard to see like write me said.

Wow, you're really experienced at drawing realistically. =D I really like the first two. Just out of the blue, but do you have any suggestions at drawing realistically. Lately I've ...