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There was once a tree, now a page with a tree verse. Superfluous, huh?

Is a leaf a leaf or the sap that retreated back into the tree?

I knew, and I jumped anyway. The regret is pungent, like garlic. He came. He left. I'm pregnant. Always check the back seat. I trusted you once. Never again. "Impossible?" ...

Often times when you write something raw you're unable to step back and analyse it technically. It becomes a lot harder to submit it for critique, because when someone says ...

If you're using swear words, be mindful of the rhythm they create. Be mindful of repetition of any words, but especially swear words because they are very very obvious. Repetition ...

Guys, John Marsden, "Tomorrow When the War Began" and series etc. Female protag, but realistic teenage crap and explosions. Appeals equally to both sexes. Marsden's quite clever that way.

If an emo poem sent me to the depths of despair and shattered my soul, that would be an effective poem, an ineffective one would be self indulgent attention seeking ...

Woo! I'm there!

Other than anything by Italo Calvino, the book from the 1870s by the name of: "Creative and Sexual Science Including Manhood Womanhood and their mutual Interrelations Love Its Laws Powers ...

Orchestrate for his tongue in technicolor, with witticisms drooping dappled delight, puns punches profound, extravagant exclamations exuding ecstasy. Translate his grunts to elysian sound. Find Gleeso

Very intriguing and articulate musings, which I long to delve more deeply in, but just two quick comments. First, I disagree that poets, musicians, painters and sculptors are "born" to ...