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Re: Whats your favourite book?
Other than anything by Italo Calvino, the book from the 1870s by the name of: "Creative and Sexual Science Including Manhood Womanhood and their mutual Interrelations Love Its Laws Powers ...
Jun 14, 2007 -
Re: Projections of Love and Sorrow: On Love and Longing /P
Critiquing the Critics Clau; babymaking, my panties, now. MB: "Ditto", not "Dido", Dido's a mythical character immortalized in a a Purcell opera, with her name stolen by a nonabrasive if ...
May 23, 2007 -
Re: Projections of Love and Sorrow: On Words Misunderstood /P
I love the haze of it, the numb of it, you know. There's a kind of hoarse desperation to Jeremy and Richard, like a small and profoundly impotent dog trying ...
May 21, 2007 -
Re: Projections of Love and Sorrow: The Laws of Gravitation /P
Goodness Gracious Mary Agnes, where are all the replies to this? And so luke-warm comments. Your work is untouched my mediocrity, and yet the awkward blubling of the unformed thought.. ...
May 18, 2007 -
Re: Prosthesis #41 /P
I'm still in my interstate moving type phase and slumming internet cafes, so here is a review in senryu. Better shredding awaits you movement is improved grandeur weighted minutiae gut-rotting, ...
Apr 17, 2007 -
Re: Who's afraid of the snow?
Away from the anythinggoes of commercial whoredom, into the breach of highpaid callgirlism of everyone throwing money at your genius. Well, almost everyone, I'm still gonna shred you. Except for ...
Apr 17, 2007 -
Re: To Milgram
I woke to stiff red numbers. And shrieking. I like that. You go for the sensation rather than naming it. Evocative. Your first lines are almost like lyrics, with the ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: Beneath the Sheets
May I use my little, fumbled and ill-worded knowledge to dispute the noble opinions preceding mine, even though trying to shred Inc's work is a worthy cause, one I subscribe ...
Mar 29, 2007 -
Re: Prosthesis Prologue /P
This generation is a wicked generation; it seeks for a sign, and yet no sign shall be given to it... —Luke 11:29 Very evocative. Brooding, but deliciously so. Okay, I ...
Mar 25, 2007 -
Re: Who's afraid of the snow?
See, Inc, I told you you were a god. (After the whole bagging the crap out of you thing) Who knew the faceless mouth of commercialism would have secretly cutivated ...
Mar 25, 2007 -
Re: Ultra-short Fiction
Orchestrate for his tongue in technicolor, with witticisms drooping dappled delight, puns punches profound, extravagant exclamations exuding ecstasy. Translate his grunts to elysian sound. Find Gleeso
Mar 24, 2007 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted, but to achieve such realism you are conscripted and die brutally from friendly fire. Also, your uniform makes uyour butt look big. I wish I always knew what I ...
Mar 24, 2007 -
Re: My Hair
Delicate, lyrical and very funny indeed. I am amused. Technically, this is not a haiku, it is a senryu. A haiku relates to nature, environment, usually they're pastoral in nature. ...
Mar 11, 2007 -
Re: Of Mice and Men, Character Analysis: Lennie
Ahh, I remember reading this book. If you want, you can link it back to Frankenstein's monster, the architypal misunderstood outcast. What you didn't mension at all was that Lennie ...
Mar 6, 2007 -
Re: A4 White
This was one of my majors last year, and it got good marks, but in retrospect its embarrasingly amatuerish. Makes me nauseous how crap it is. The concept was okay, ...
Mar 2, 2007
