Kit

Did you just withdraw your post? I am amused.

**laughs** I knew I'd like you. I am sorry, I'm provocative and contrary by nature, and I only attack those who can take it, an opinion that melts when challenged ...

Navel-gazing? Come on, use the technical term, omphaloskepsis. It's more fun.

So I get your frustration at bad critics, and aside from your pretty heavy grave robbing of ee cummings, that's what this work seems to me, a tirade against criticism. ...

Gee whiz, that's a creative spelling of woke, it really got my attention. Okay, it's been established this needs to be longer, and you have a lot of editing before ...

Enigmatic, dense but no impenetrable. Elegant, I love your sense of space. Hinting at an epic grandeur. This is a labyrinth of chimera. low on this high infinity For some ...

He likes when she is flushed from the shower her vermilion veins vermicular peel her proud pallor particular her wet hair knotted whiskery eels, and her sour peppered white-sauce musk ...

Upon first reading, I thought this is a Christmas card. Sweet, mainly visual, but a little too flat and papery to devour. But really then that's what this poem is ...

Oh but Via, you can't make too much of the violence of the vegies, otherwise you'd lose the point that nobody makes much of the violence of the vegies. Actually ...

Oh now since when is that a criticism, 'it's about nothing', life is about nothing. Poetry that are exercises in observation are just as valid as conceptual works, as observational ...

Not entirely without pith. I like your first stanza's initial violence and then somewhat satirically saccharine analogies. Complex, and yet mundane, Americana and eviscerating the empty American dream

Oh yeah, just one ore thing, why did you call it "The Accused" and not "The Condemned"?

Few brief things. Pavel Ippolitovich disliked his shackles, he disliked that, upon walking into the cart, he had stepped into animal droppings, and he especially disliked that he was going ...

This is so deliciously frenetic. Now, I will notice around here there tends to be an anti-modernist/post modernist sentiment, and I'll admit terrible things have been done with stream of ...

Welcome, welcome. This really sucked me in. I smell John Steinbeck, DH Lawrence, Annie Proux, Joanne Harris, a little George Orwell, perhaps, along with your allusion to "Charlotte's Web", your ...