Kit

Dear Ameliorating Amelia, I actually like your changes quite a bit here, I think it refines it, in it's state now there's an elegance to it, without taking away from ...

He was a great actor, of course. I can think of no one so Australian, the cheeky Perth Rock Eisteddfod boy, naming his daughter Matilda, even. A friend of mine ...

Hey, have you ever done Scrap choral works, you know, when everyone learns something then puts it together in a day? I'm doing scrap Carmina Burana next year, it'll be ...

I always find Requiems evocative as choral music, especially Faure's Requiem, and Bach's chorales. But if you want a lateral kind of influence, check out Sarah Hopkins' choral music. And ...

This poem made me think of three things, "the Paperbag Princess", "Someone to Watch Over Me", and oddly enough the lyric style of the Dandy Warhols. When I think of ...

Granted but it's made of lips. I wish there was no Christmas.

Filth! Rot! I completely disagree and disembowel everything my predescessors said of this vile rancour you have the audacity to label "Narrative Poetry". I could smear my feet with fine ...

Hullo Kazdrea if you wish to be so eponymous, if you don't wish to be eponymous then give us another name and we shall dub thee. I am Kit, and ...

I disagree with everyone before me. (No, really, Kit? however could that be?) Yes, sharper focus would help this, probably if you got rid of the treadmill, you'd have clearer ...

I told you controversy was a good thing. Excessive line breaks work in minimalism, if it was a couple of lines, but a longer poem it interrupts your flow and ...

Bah, you need music for this. Similar tone to "Lilac Wine", on similar subject matter, if you've heard it, Jeff Buckley did a version of it. : See, it's kind ...

Good specifics in imagery. Starts off with the "I'm writing a song about whatever I happen to be thinking about.. and look over there there's something that could be shiney.. ...

That line, and the title, 'the beauty of a rape scene', you don't really do much with it, which is not good. To even talk about rape is taboo in ...

At its best moment's it's got this Queens of the Stoneage "Skin on Skin" feel. And it tint your pinkly cheeks That's my favourite line. "pinkly cheeks" is lovely. We ...

Well, probably one the better lot of Christmas lyrics this year. Moments of ranting, keep your focus tight. I've never met anyone who without fee Would let me sit on ...