Kit

If you're using swear words, be mindful of the rhythm they create. Be mindful of repetition of any words, but especially swear words because they are very very obvious. Repetition ...

Oh who am I kidding, I'm cw bound anyways. **puts on the boots** "Because what I wanted was a revolution" the sky is blue, woo-ohhh, we all want to change ...

I'm glad we're bringing in quotations here, I've come across a surprising number of Christians who haven't read the Bible all the way through, they're lead into an interpretation rather ...

T'would be interesting for Mr. Ledger to get the Oscar postmortem--is there a precedent? Either way, I can't wait. I've always loved Joker, and while this one looks to be ...

also me the Kit

“If I believed in signs, I wouldn't have answered it. I would have buried my head under pillows and blankets until I couldn't hear it or the voices or the ...

OKAY, so I only have a third of the crit, because the silly site ate it and I'm sick of typing it again, and it's midnight, and I have had ...

If Sylvia Plath wrote AD Hope's "Australia" and then Woody Allen filmed it, it would be this. Very stream of consciousness, very self conscious, very scattered. There are moments of ...

“That’s a pretty toy, preacher man,” she says. The lines of her body are angular and improbable. She wears layers of other people’s clothes; each garment ragged enough to be ...

Wow, your poetry of late has reached this whole other level, and that frightens me just a little. I mean, wow. This one I don't like so much as others, ...

Oh, come on, we can agree torture is wrong, right? So what it comes down to is whether the supposedly borderline treatments are torture or not. Now, there are numerous ...

Poignant portrait of Madonna and Child, and I do like the intermingling of the experiment and the emotional. I liked the wire roots, and the relationship between the two is ...

This is an interesting palate you're working from. Your language and dialogue is so accessible, it feels organic and simplistic, yet the ideas and relationship between them is complex. So ...

Gee whiz, speedy crits, thanks guys, you're brilliant. Fledgling: I don't know about the same house, they really died in different houses, as she left him and died in the ...

She was slain by her own toiletries. She had been happily engaged until she saw the bristles of her toothbrush leaning against his, and the "family size" sunscreen, and the ...