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Re: of the sea
Take off your pants, and eat this chocolate bread, we are going to talk about Debussy, cherie, for I am zee sonics mermaid, come to butter your croissant. Why are ...
Sep 15, 2011 -
Re: Break him
I would define " secretly/ she was asking for this" as a punch line, it is the dramatic twist after all. I understand the metaphor, but what I am trying ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Break him
Wow, did you ever miss the point. Men are dramatically likely to come forward about being assaulted than women are, in fact it's so common a joke, you find it ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Break him
Do you know five women? I have a very dark sense of humor, I like dirty jokes, but rape jokes are a pet peeve of mine, because one in five ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Wanting to end it all
Hi Katlyn. I can see that this poem comes from a very raw place for you, maybe your voice, maybe the voice of a friend. This is in very stark ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: YWS Invades Russia
I propose that a special task force infiltrate the Russian high command and find out the location of these trees, which should be our primary objective. The secondary will be ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: YWS Invades Russia
Name: Kitri Ivanova Rank: Mercenary Specialization: Femme Fatale for hire, Counter Intelligence, Propaganda, "The Honey Pot". Favourite Colour: Blood Red, my dear. Personality: Russian Sophisticate, c
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Sparks and Rushes to the Head
Starting from the beginning of the beginning. Kit's nitpickingish nitpicking critique part the One Moments I found this one interesting, I don't know why it reminded me of the beats. ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Is homosexuality a choice or a result of nature?
In regards to homosexuality and health, the homosexual population has a significantly higher incidences of a large number of diseases. One of the reasons for homosexual population having higher incide
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Cadaver
I assure you, I only spend time on a poem if I think that it has merit, there's no point critiquing someone who doesn't have the intellect and talent to ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: Is homosexuality a choice or a result of nature?
Homosexual people can have kids. They can adopt, they can use a sperm donor, they can be foster parents. Besides which are people deemed useful and natural only by their ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: United We Stand
United we stand For I will forever hold you hand In this graying bliss With your sweetest kiss We can forever be Together; just you and me No complications, Or ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: Cadaver
Cadaver I’m just another Cadaver. Formaldehyde sits in my veins Like fragrant pink blood. I live in a refrigerator. I am cold, dead. Mute. My teeth are yellow From the ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: Bad Boy
You don't even know, You stupid, clueless boy, That the way that you've been treating me Has made my heart a toy. You don't even realize, You foolish, bumbling lout, ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: Its time.
Don’t you think its time? For Me, to stop being me, and become the woman I’m suppose to be.. I just don’t know how, to let my childhood go, And ...
Aug 9, 2011
