KissKiss08

KissKiss08 wrote: I'm still working on making my poems more consistent, but I tried to make it as formal as I could without completely changing my original draft. Formal? As ...

Thanks for the reviews guys. :D I understand how some of the peom cvould be a little confusing because the poem is not talking about an actual horse it's a ...

well I thought it was really good. The part about it being redundant i know you ment for it to be that way. Since it's not a rhyming poem, the ...

To clarify the "open car door" part Open is describing door. They are running to the car doors which are open... sorry, I don't know how else to put it. ...

Thank guys, I'm working on this poem and adding some more stanzas, to try and make it easier to understand. I didn't really think about it when I worte it, ...

Thank you for your comments. I don't exactly understand why it seems to have no emotion. This piece is about a very emotional subject for me. So, If someone could ...

If someone dies, does anyone really care? I doubt they do anymore, that emotion has long been quashed out of their soul. And yet they pretend, they all pretend, trying ...