Kirahh

I can hear the rustling sound the leaves made when the wind kissed them gently. I can smell blood flowing with the midnight breeze. I stood, breathing in the cold ...

Hello. I'm pretty sure this piece is going up on my favourites. Why? Because it touched me, which is what you should be aiming for when people read your stuff. ...

Prologue Thomas I stumbled against my own feet, but I kept running. They were here. I felt their presence. They were getting closer and closer. I was getting closer to ...

You're a really talented writer. One thing I'd like to recommend. Maybe you should try using semicolons instead of colons. Other than that, I liked the way you described things. ...