Kinsley

I've read the trilogy and if you do, it will all make sense. the community in the second book ties to the thrid and the thrid ties to the first. ...

I originally had it without that stanza but it seemed like I had too much of chorus so I put it in there. Personally I like it better my original ...

Although this is my first song I've ever written, I would really like to know what you think of it. It goes in the book I'm writing so I need ...

Haha, this was an awesome poem. Very cute, and the rythm really drew my attention. I don't know of a title, maybe Baseball? That's all I can think of. :) ...

Okay, hold up. I assuming I forgot something here. To my understanding Baer and Ruben are brothers? I think that's what it said. Well anyways... Elysia put a hand on ...

I disagree with people saying that it didn't flow because of rhyming. BUT It seems too obvious in the second stanza. And in the last stanza you use 'sorrow' which ...

"Do you have a certain favor in mind?" Elysia heard Baer ask. Alpheus put a finger to his lips. "Shh. I hear breathing. Someone is watching us." Elysia snapped her ...

Since Sarabeth won't play a part until later, I'm going to be Adam for right now. Only until some one claims him though. My legs hurt and Addie keeps complaining ...

Interesting, *Rubs chin* very interesting.

Anyone care to add anything to the story? :wink:

Oh, and the Star Wars thing seemed very out of the blue to me.

Honestly, I really didn't understand this poem. (Although, I'm assuming it's about friends who stay together forever?) But that's okay. You don't have to modify YOUR poem so that it ...

Ohhh. Very cool. I wan to see how the story progresses before I join it, okay?

*Kinsley kills a small rabbit* What now?

Um, I totally don't get what you just said. Sorry, I must be dumb or something...