Kinsley

I also liked this poem a lot and I feel that it can really relate other kids who are your age at the time you wrote this. Aside from the ...

Kk, thanks. A million words it is..

Okay, I have a really long story here and I was wondering if I could post it or if it would be too long. You said AT LEAST 5000 words ...

Ooohhh, very interesting. Okay, first I'd like to say that the beginning had a hard time holding my interest until the fire. It was descriptive and I liked that it ...

I loved the last stanza th best, particularly the last line. I don't know how to describe what I feel about it but I love it. Ingenious. Maybe I'm just ...

M.J. I can’t say goodbye; You won’t let me say hello And even though I can’t let you go, Your staying is a lie I’ve said it once, I’m sorry; ...

Elysia rubbed her sleepy eyes and sat up. It was still dark out and the sky showed no signs of giving up the night to the day. She glanced around, ...

Elysia sighed deeply and glanced at Alpheus who was walking beside her. Although their time together had been short, she was becoming attached to everyone. What if something were to ...

Elysia walked slowly behind Baer with Miya skipping happily beside her. Something's not right , she thought to herself. Baer is being too vague about his father. There must be ...

Lilyan smiled at her triumph. She had finally found Naomi after only one night of tracking her. "Who are you?" her small voice asked. "I'm someone who is wondering why ...

Lilyan silently followed Riku for a good three miles when she caught wind of another trail. Somewhat familiar but still vague. The wind blowing in from the East brought the ...

Baer staggered into the clearing, his clothing sopping wet, along with another man who looked similar. Alpheus shot them a suspicious look and Baer smiled. "We had a little disagreement ...

Wow, it's really been a long time. Finally my computer is fixed. Anyways... Prosper floated into view. Elysia flashed him a smile and watched him harvesting the vegatables that had ...

Elysia covered her eyes to sheild herself from the carnage. Alpheus was with Miya but Baer stood alone. A single tear slipped down her cheek. She bent down in front ...

Sorry I've been gone for so long. I'm grounded. Anyways, not quite sure how to further the story at this point other than the group making it to a town. ...