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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Shadows of Depression

    Actually, I wrote it as some creature creeping up and dragging me into a deep state of depression. If I wrote "upon me" then it would take away from the ...

    Nov 12, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Shadows of Depression

    Translating won't be a problem at all, it's just that the translation may screw up parts of it that had a deeper tone. But upon your request, I will certainly ...

    Nov 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Dark Love

    Thank you, everyone, so very much for your thoughts and considerations on this piece. I do understand that now, with the twisted and almost sickening view of modern vampires due ...

    Oct 24, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Dark Love

    A night of dark desire, A song of subtlety, Wolves vent their loneliness, The beautiful one arises. Mist shrouds her pale form, A most everlasting desire. Her ebony hair cascades ...

    Sep 29, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Lost at Sea [repost]

    What an elegant piece! As if i was there tossing and turning amongst the waves!

    Jul 23, 2011
  • General Articles Re: A horrible, horrible smile

    Quite vivid. few grammatical errors but not too much. Good piece.

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Shadows of Depression

    Thanks for you compliment! Yeah, I actually wrote this one day when I was deeply depressed and I'm constantly battling it as of a power struggle crisis over my life. ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Shadows of Depression

    The Shadows of Depression This shadow creeping upon me I want to rid of it Wanting to tear my soul apart Like a black cloud above It's getting closer It ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: In The Shadows

    Out of sight lurks a monster so horrid. Everyday it gets harder to rid. There's nowhere to hide from it, so here I remain; here I sit. I let it ...

    Jan 17, 2011


Perhaps it is better to wake up after all, even to suffer, rather than to remain a dupe to illusions all one's life.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening