KingLucifer

Thank you Ranger Hawk, It's been a headache with not being reviewed like I wanted and seeing other stories after mine getting replies. But I can finally get back to ...

Lavvie, read the description line next time I had a serious faceplam just now.

I can't even consider that a review, can I please get someone decent here?

This is great you've gotten better it was good before but this is better, a lot more detail is in this I can tell plus it gives you an eery ...

In tecnial terms you didn't reveiw it cause it's showing up on my end that this has zero reviews. Maybe you need to make your comment longer.

It sounds like I did better than to what your saying.

I'm sorry I had to laugh at the correct you made with the first paragraph. it's not a haha your stupid but a kind of you got my character wrong ...

Also @Kirahh I like to ask you to reframe from saying any thoughts to what my female charcter said cause I'm trying to figure out on how to remove your ...

Thank you two for reveiwing it aint that good because I had been up all night with a friend so I wasn't exactly consentrated. but it was one of those ...

Ok hands down this was good. I feel like im not alone anymore... I MEAN uhhh I really liked it you put in a lot of work on this. it ...