KingLucifer

No teams this time? That's what I was wondering. Riveting, no? ;) Haha a Free for all!? I'm up and I almost always win haha let's see this go uP

This is very good it's small but it's good enough to keep a person intreasted, I say you could have put in more like some dialoge or what cloths you ...

At least the story is good. I don't mind being bugged by how many notices I'm getting.

Awww man all guy slots are taken I had thought of joining.

Yo sup welcome to YWS one of the best places around if ya need some reveiwing done I'm sure someone is already looking around for a good story be sure ...

Hey, what's up? is what I love to say to someone I meet, but its up to you lol. but welcome to YWS a pretty good place if your looking ...

Also @Kirahh I like to ask you to reframe from saying any thoughts to what my female charcter said cause I'm trying to figure out on how to remove your ...

Thank you two for reveiwing it aint that good because I had been up all night with a friend so I wasn't exactly consentrated. but it was one of those ...

For Description cause I could not fit it all: I might turn this into a full blown novel depending on how to reveiws go and how many people are intreasted. ...

I read this all, front to back and side to side. you can smack a teenager hard with this and being one myself really makes me look this over and ...

Oh, I see well if your ever looking for someone to join in come and find me. I'm on most of the time.

Uhh I don't know what to say, that's quite a gift your giving me. But thank you for your kindness.

Ok hands down this was good. I feel like im not alone anymore... I MEAN uhhh I really liked it you put in a lot of work on this. it ...

Am I to late? or do I still have a chance? Please let me know.

Haha most definatly count me in! let me know when it is up and running. I would like to be a son of Athena. I love the Percy Jackson and ...