KingLucifer

Woooow that is like the only part I never bothered to read, surprising really but whatever.

Whoa, whoa, whoa YWS requires members to be 13 or older to be joining up here how in did a 12 year old get past that?

This is a great start to a nice long story book, there are things tho that you do need to fix, like some grammical mistakes plus some rewording can do ...

Well then a writter who has been writing for several years now eh? And your only 13? well this is intreasting enough sounds like you maybe be a natural born ...

@Sunshine: May I suggest first kisses at the Homecoming dance? that would be a very nice end. to things and then we move on with a propcey to keep the ...

What Ignorance said, You can't expect a post everyday to be a good leader patientce is key right now.

Well now, I'm a tad late ain't I? can anyone give me the filler in though comment or message, more preferably message? and another thing; @Sunshine: I do have a ...

I would believe that's where I would come in to take up a spot or two. If the maker of this would like I could take over for Dragonette, well ...

Name: Andrew Stoddard Age 15 Parents Mortal: Sharon Stoddard and Godly: Mars Appearance: Big and tough looking always off in his head, deep in thought. Has black hair and blood ...

This is great some fixes here and there and its good I like it. I normally don't read about vampires but this is fairly great. unlike twilight we have the ...

I'm sorry I had to laugh at the correct you made with the first paragraph. it's not a haha your stupid but a kind of you got my character wrong ...

Cadet Challenge Chapter 2: A battle within Darkness. Now I know what you might be thinking ain’t I in way over my head with a three verses one? It’s true ...

This is really great I honestly can't find anything wrong with this story, the character's are great starting out here. And I would love to read more and hopefully see ...

This is a great story, I really like what you have here. it seems spontaniously chaging parts from demon wolves to sleeping in the outdoors to some gaint bird out ...

This is a story I wanted to write its possibly going to be three chapter's long. the people that are shown in here are REAL people. This is mainly a ...