KingLucifer

I can't even consider that a review, can I please get someone decent here?

“Player eliminated.” The mechanical voice called out. “Squad leader eliminated.” “Game Over.” “Winner Player One.” It was over before I knew it, I had nearly keeled over with knowing I

For having a funny avatar.

9/10 Pretty good.

Yea I like a review over here if you don't mind. I been meaning to post up a final chapter but I would like somebody to review the chapter before. ...

This is fairly good I'm personally not a fan of thw whole "werewolf fighting" concept but this story was decent, at most. I say you could have added physical description's ...

This is great you've gotten better it was good before but this is better, a lot more detail is in this I can tell plus it gives you an eery ...

This I must say really makes me think your being bullied everyday, I'm not saying that you are but what you write here makes me think that you are and ...

This is a good start there was no spelling mistakes for what I saw and plenty of dialoge which is good. maybe for the real start you could give a ...

I take the frozen mods I be hilarous in my opinion no offense to any mods lol.

In tecnial terms you didn't reveiw it cause it's showing up on my end that this has zero reviews. Maybe you need to make your comment longer.

It sounds like I did better than to what your saying.

You know I got to really hand it to AlexInCircusland and sarebear, the story between Paulie and Timothy Eight is really good, it's mainly whats kept my intreast so far ...

I put my back to the wall and slid down, exsuasted from the events so far. Amanda was willing to betray James secretly. But openly she would fight me, I ...

Drop the subject BlueRasberry.