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Re: The Character Tavern
I'll be RPing as Luis Stoddard, Son of the Roman God of War Mar's. I walk in and take a seat at the counter, "Get me a soda ya mind?" ...
Feb 8, 2012 -
Re: Howling Wolf ~Part 1.
Hello this is the MasterLHeart here with your review and Well, I went though this in a minute flat. And for the most part I didn't like it. It was ...
Jan 25, 2012 -
Re: A constent frustration.
WARNING: The following contain's a rant about YWS overhaul and how frustrated writer can't seem to get a review. You have been warned. A constant frustration for me is the ...
Jan 19, 2012 -
Re: Roman Beginning's Chapter 2
I walked back to the house seeing the wolves guarding the door, I sheathed my short gold sword feeling the two at my sides I felt strong I quickly realized ...
Jan 14, 2012 -
Re: Roman Beginning's (Edited) Seg: One; Chapter One
I sat atop a cabin over looking a lake out in a forest, I began to think to myself the events that led up to me being where I was. ...
Jan 5, 2012 -
Re: Roman Beginning's Seg One. Chapter One.
Thank you Ranger Hawk, It's been a headache with not being reviewed like I wanted and seeing other stories after mine getting replies. But I can finally get back to ...
Jan 5, 2012 -
Re: Roman Beginning's Seg One. Chapter One.
I sat atop a cabin over looking a lake out in a forest, I began to think to myself the events that lead up to me being where I was. ...
Dec 28, 2011 -
Re: Welcome to Apollo! Nothing works...
I do like blue its my favorite color, but taking into consideration of I still can't post a few stories I have that I been meaning to, I have to ...
Dec 24, 2011 -
Re: Western Story
This was rather amusing to read for me, simply because I enjoy reading about the wild west. and in my opinion this is very nice piece of work here. I ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: Drugs
Well I'll say this is one of the darker poem's I've read so far, I can say at most it's ok. I guess but I believe there could be more ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: Scream
This was fairly good it reminded me of goosebumps a bit, but still fairly good in its own way. I could say you cn turn this into a story, maybe ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: The Sadness of a lone teen.
Lavvie, read the description line next time I had a serious faceplam just now.
Dec 17, 2011 -
Re: The Sadness of a lone teen.
I’ve been alone all my life with just me and my family. Yea I was your somewhat average teen, but I never had a girlfriend for Christmas I never had ...
Dec 17, 2011 -
Re: Magnificent Mansion Chapter 1
I've really never taken an intreast in a murder mystery so this will be my first review on one so I must apologize if my review seems, unbalenced. But I ...
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: Eagle Talon Files chapter two
This is generally great, I do believe if you think about it enough you can make the chapter's longer. Take time between each one and try to think of how ...
Dec 10, 2011
