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Re: Trains
I really liked how this was written. Not too much description, not too much inner thinking from the narrator. Just right. The piece itself also got me thinking a lot, ...
Sep 23, 2008 -
Re: The Note
This hits pretty close to home for me, because I was made fun of and ridiculed a lot when I was in elementary school. The bullies never wrote notes to ...
Sep 23, 2008 -
Re: NightBlind
A/N: I've had this idea since the beginning of this year (2008), and I've been editing it in various directions until it came out into this particular form. It started ...
Sep 23, 2008 -
Re: A Life Deferred
Hey! Been awhile, Tina. I liked the point you were trying to make with this script, but it seemed like Victoria reached her epiphany a little too soon, and Jared ...
Aug 4, 2008 -
Re: Rain
read first post for announcement, please.
Feb 24, 2008 -
Re: Rain: Chapter 13
Thanks for the comment. =)
Feb 4, 2008 -
Re: Evil
I'm not fond of "evil" in characters... As a matter of fact, I'm not fond of "good," either. Characters are all (usually) people who have various goals in mind for ...
Jan 28, 2008 -
Re: ♥ Art Boy
I liked this the same as everyone else who's commented so far, so I'll point out a few things that I found wrong about it, to me, at least. While ...
Jan 28, 2008 -
Re: The Queen of Dolls
I love how this is pretty weird, but strangely true at the same time. My sister made me play with her barbie dolls all the time, so I can relate ...
Jan 26, 2008 -
Re: Rain
Chapter 13 has been posted.
Jan 26, 2008 -
Re: Rain: Chapter 13
A/N: I'm not sure if I went overboard with this chapter or not with the changing of viewpoints. Personally, I think that I changed too much, and that it broke ...
Jan 26, 2008 -
Re: Rain: Chapter 12
A/N: Okay, sorry for the month-and-a-half long gap between chapters, but I was busy with NaNoWriMo in November, which lasts the whole month. If nobody reads this chapter, then I'll ...
Dec 19, 2007 -
Re: NanoWriMo Wordcount '07
Hellz yes! I just wrote 3709 words in one go, in less than on and a half hours! >=D *dips hands into arctic ocean for relief* aaahhhhhhhhh.... Current word count: ...
Nov 20, 2007 -
Re: NanoWriMo Wordcount '07
Damn. I hate myself right about now. I didn't write at all on Saturday due to a huge plot twist in a game that I was playing, so I finished ...
Nov 4, 2007 -
Re: NaNo Quotes
MC trying to get into a elevator. I did this mainly for word count. -------------------------------- “Hold the doors!” I shouted. My calls seemed to fall upon deaf ears as the ...
Nov 3, 2007
