Kinera

This is fantastic. I really enjoyed that you left this poem very free form, like thoughts. I only have two pieces of advice: make sure all the first words of ...

Phantoms She lights a match In fear of fright Until the dawn Releases light. In agony Of troubled thoughts, She turns to Mom, Who cannot help. Her Dad can't help, ...

Thanks everyone!

Thanks both of you!

Thank you! This makes me feel so much better. Roon, thanks for your compliments, it made me feel so good about myself. And I will definitely let you know if ...

This was incredibly meaningful, well put together, and just fantastic. I realize I am new and my criticism isn't as valid, but I have just two things to say. I ...

Hello! I'm Kelly, and I'd just like to say I'm very happy to be here. I actually signed up for YWS a long time ago, but I was too afraid ...

mhmmcolleenx0 - I think of a very self-assured girl whose name would probably be used as an AIM screen name (I cheated, sorry) of a character in a teenage drama ...

Hey, wonderful piece. I know my opinion is not as important as the senior writers, but I'd like to add my thoughts if you're willing to hear them. I'm assuming ...

That was fantastic. I especially love: "Now you want me? Now I'm gone." It's just incredibly powerful. Are the words "Sunshine" and "Eclipse" supposed to be capitalized though? I'm not ...

"Contained" Clear pastel scents from The liquid everything. Movements to dance the air, A white pill to make Forms around spin drowsily. Blue and white contained In sterile horizontal stripes. ...