KindlingDragonsFire

Haha, yeah, it's an exposition city up there. I had to do a bit of a word crunch for it, because I was writing it for a hard science fiction ...

Thank you! I don't really know if I'm going to continue it. Most likely, though things might happen.

Wow, you're really on top of it! However, I'm not sure if there will be a part 2 (sorry to disappoint!), even though I've been working on it. And you're ...

Yeah, it's exposition city up there. I wrote this for a pseudoscience-fiction sort of competition, so I had to fit everything in 500 words. I went over it and smoothed ...

I agree, that comma doesn't fit. Gotta change that... And with the other one, well, there are a few ways to spell pummelled :P Thank you for your review! I ...

Whoops, that review submitted twice. Sorry about that.

I never thought I'd like a story about a rat and a girl as much as I did. I never thought I'd say that sentence, either. Well done intro, to ...

Alrighty then.

Whoops... Forgot to add the princess.

Thank you.

Hey, why not.

Sometimes, sometimes, sometimes, sometimes, rarely, always, never. MIRACLES.

WOOO! I would love to read the rest of it. Thank you for clearing some stuff up, my curiosity is sated for the moment. But you've raised even more questions! ...

Thank you!

Thank you for the review! I will definitely keep that in mind.