Kimberlykat

Wow, that was brilliant!! Makes me wanna have soup!

Wow! It puts me in a state of confused understanding if that makes sense! Amazing!

Amazing amazing chapter there! keep up the good work!

As Trident said, good use of sound...but I don't think the poem has much more beyond that. I have trouble understanding it, and I think this is a result of ...

Hi Kimberly, There are some interesting sounds in here and I like the way you have experimented with sound. I suggest using punctuation in your poem as it is a ...

Describes almost the same feeling as I this Christmas! Interesting.