Kim

all i can say is wow,,,,,,,,,i was drawn from the first paragraph, very good description of the characters and their emotions. keep going, and i willl keep reading.

I liked this very much. the discription was amazing, i could feel the power of the mind. actually i loved this, and i normally do not iike poetry. keep going, ...

I really liked this, it wasnt just the layout of the poem, but the feeling you put out there. i could actually feel what you had written. i dont write ...