Kilo

I sit in this room So dim and so lonesome Tears in my eyes... I dont know why... She distrusts me I'm affected. Thunder Cracks, Lightning flashes It screams with ...

I'm Glad i could entertain you, Swish :)

Please review some of my work, i'd really appreciate it :) _____________________________________________________ Thanks, -Kilo :)

When she talks, My heart it stops Her voice a treasure Her presence a pleasure. When she cries I'll be there to wipe her tears Right off her eyes Eyes ...

I like the pne you currently have! it looks awesome! but i understand the need to change, i'll get working asap :)

wow, that was awesome. i look forward to reading more of your work :3

great collage, it works together to illustrate a part of your personal life and a part of a mindset :)

My nameless beauty, So polite so strong, Some wish her grief, I wish her love, I tell her to tell me her wish, Fore I shall grant it, She whispers ...

This was great, i like the use of diction and i really appreciate how you incorperated some powerful words into the more sorrowful parts of the poem, i really look ...

"She covers her eyes and avoids to see. She whispers his name in dreams in her sleep. She takes his hand and presses it to her cheek. She tells him ...

Wow. that was...deep. sad, yet sweet. i like how it goes from pain, to fear, to anger, to happiness. it really shows the light at the end of the tunnel. ...

I like this. Simple, yet fun and playful. i look forward to reading more :)

Hey guys, thanks for the feedback. Basically, this was just a random little story I wrote when I was hyped up on sugar. It was put together quickyly, but it ...

It all started with our uber geek, the space panda, woke up in a haunted thicket. It was the eighth time it had happened. Feeling really concerned, the space pandas ...

Wow, This was funny, well put together, and i can't find one single mistake in it! great job miles, keep writing :).