Killyouwithwords

Well I appreciate your criticism, so don't worry about it! And I would love to see a poem in which hands were hanfs and half the lines didn't make sense ...

Thank you again for your honesty, and yes I did read your other review first. I'm sorry about the grammatical errors in both...I should not write poetry when I'm tired ...

Thank you for your honesty, and yes I was VERY tired when wrote this :) I'll try to put my final draft up soon!

Wow. Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it :)

And you are fantastic at flattery!!! ;) Thank you so much for you feedback, it's very appreciated :)

Thank you a whole bunch ;)

Thank you so much, I was hoping the sentence lengths wouldn't make it harder to read. I'm really very tight with grammar and spelling so I'm glad you didn't find ...

Thank you!

Thank you, but I'm not actually finished writing it...I saved it as a draft so it wouldn't't get deleted. I plan on making it a bit more lighthearted at the ...

Well that's, quite literally, the best compliment I've ever received on my writing!! I've already said it too many times today, but THANK YOU!!

Thank you so much!!! I've been trying to fix the last line since another reviewer commented on it too, so I'll try your advice.

Thankyou so much for your feedback, and I agree with what you said about the lines being too wordy...I'll definitely take your advice and edit it again.

I was planning on writing a review, you know, earning points and all; but I soon realized I couldn't tear your story apart very effectively when all I can say ...