KilljoyRetardedFish

You've done it again! I LOVED IT. The honor killing, the hesitations, it was all amazing. I feel that you captured reality, the harsh reality that we live in today. ...

I loved your poem, it flowed very beautifully. Sorry I can't really help much with this because I am not very good at poetry (even though I write a lot ...

I really liked your story, but there was one part that I had an issue with. Adele stated that she had forgotten that day, but later she says she can ...

I LOOOOOVE THIS! It describes...well me. The message is clear, and I'm pretty sure everyone can relate to this. I completely agree because I've thought that way and felt that ...

I liked it!!!! You made going into a crazy man's head amazing; I normally don't like these kinds of stories, but you made it very understandable. Stories about crazy people ...

This is very beautiful, I enjoyed reading it a lot. I envisioned this happening, so you can portray the 'show, not tell' rule very well. Keep writing I would like ...

I liked this songfic, but it was a little difficult to follow. I understand you need to imply some things, but explaining at least who the girl was that the ...

I LOVED THIS. *ahem* Now that I'm done, it makes you want to slap Nathan upside the head just for Cheyenne. The emotion is clearly shown in this story, and ...

I love this story. It's not cheesy at all. In a way, you could just see this happening. It makes you want to find love as powerful as that (even ...

I loved it. The reality, and the love that the man had for his wife. Even though generally I don't like stories that show the actual dialogue, I especially enjoyed ...