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Thanks. I will hopefully get these mistakes fixed and put up the new chapter.

Okay thanks

Thanks for looking it over again. :D I wil try and fix the mistakes. An i will defently send you the chapters.

Very good. I loved it. It flowed very nicly and the outlook on it was very good. Even if the tenses were a little off it looked fine to me. ...

Thanks. I will go back and fix the problems.

Wow! I love it. But I do agree with Rory. I can't really tell what the carries look like. But I really do like it and I think a nice ...