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Thanks. I will hopefully get these mistakes fixed and put up the new chapter.

Okay thanks

Thanks for looking it over again. :D I wil try and fix the mistakes. An i will defently send you the chapters.

I think that it is a very interesting story. But I think it moves a little fast for them to just automaticly fall for one another. Like maybe they could ...

Very good. I loved it. It flowed very nicly and the outlook on it was very good. Even if the tenses were a little off it looked fine to me. ...

Before you do more with other chapters. I would go over and rewrite wat you have now. Like they have said above me. More setting more discription. I am horriable ...

Thanks. I will go back and fix the problems.

((My keyboard has a sticky H key so a few H's may be missing that spell check dosen't pick up.)) ------------Chapter 1--------------- Waking in a mound of sheets and blankets ...

I understood it. But I think her normal actions were a bit off for the situation. I don"t tink she would be all happy after something like that appened to ...

All together it was good. But I think that maybe some of the other's from the manga sould be involed. An I thought Tamaki's actions were a little off. he ...

Wow! I love it. But I do agree with Rory. I can't really tell what the carries look like. But I really do like it and I think a nice ...

Zelda fanfictions aren't something I normally read. But considering that it isn't something I normally read, you kept my interest. An that is a great thing in itself. Keeping writing. ...

Thanks. I normally like to stay more towards books like in chapters instead of stories. But recently I have wrote a few poems. My inspiration I guess just comes from ...

Yeah normally I stick with stories as well. I normally get a setting or a situation, maybe some lines. But I never get them together. An that frustrates me till ...

I'm not someone somebody would peg as a writer. Personally I never thought I would think of the ideas I think about. But I love to read and write. I ...