Kiaya

Hey AmeliaCogin Faded; one of those black and whites. semicolons are used to connect two senteces. one of those black and whites wouldn't sound right to me as a sentence ...

Hey, I think Teardrop covered everything, but I want you to know I love it. I see how you could turn it into a book. If you end up publishing ...

Hey. This was really good. Everyone as felt this way and need reminding. I see no mistakes so I will just say "Good job!" :) I might actually read my ...

Hey, this is Kiaya Michέllē This is amazing toots, but untrue for you. You are an excellent writer keep this up. Will all know how it is not to be ...

It's a beautiful poem. The whole being your own person. I feel you. I looked for imperfections and saw "I Be Me," I don't think that is proper, but leave ...

I love your poems, but Is "artistry" a word. You used it in your first poem.

Amazing. I love it. I see no faults to it, but then again anything put up against what I wright is usually perfect. lol. Keep up the good work.

You have chosen with the roll of your dice, You heart as you did it was cold as ice, You have a favorite and it’s him you have taken, It ...

I liked the beggining, but then I got a little confused at the end. And I am confused about the title of it, but maybe I'm just having a blond ...

I feel you. It was good. You do have a talent for making the reader feel it and that is a wonderful talent to have. I am sorry if what ...

paperbackheart has a point. It's okay, I'm not good at poetry either. but the meaning was good and it was a good writing peice

I love this poem. People don't like it when I'm not what they want. I am always changing and my emotions are unpredictable because I am bi polar so I ...

It was good. Brings back memories of times I wish I could have got revenge, but everytime I got the chance I would just think of the pain it caused ...

I love it. It feeds my soul and rings true to what I beleive in. I love it... I wonder what gave you the idea to write this...

A smile, A frown, There's up and down, The sunshine and storms, The candy and worms, A gift, a prank, A hope and hunch, A kiss and punch, Ice and ...