Kia

I just started to write in the computer lab and I came up with this..... Critique harsh or not is appreciated I know I probably have some grammatical issues but ...

Maybe you should give more details and background of each girl and it could work out and not be like a Christian story just watch what you say.

I suggest you free write and just the let the words flow then after your done organize your ideas. That always worked for me ^^

Hey peoples um my name is Kimberley but u can call me Kim or Kia whichever. Lets see I'm 18 (Just turned a month ago) and I'm a city girl. ...