Khimera9

Welcome to the forums Binkatong. Review well, write well, and stay active. Make sure you read the rules and we'll be fine. replying to an intro post is win.

I've been writing this story for a while and I've been looking around for good constructive criticism about it, so this is the first part of the first chapter of ...

I'm a total writer. I'll review if I need to but sadly I'm a bit selfish about my work. :lol:

Just finished listening to M.I.A. by avenged sevenfold and moving on to some Offspring.

I might as well rate it right now. 4.5 stars out of 5 The voice and narration of the story is extremely fluent and much easier to read than others. ...

Okay, that was a weird way of how you put this thing together. If you were trying to lengthen the size of your story then that's a negative. Second, your ...

I read the whole thing and I can only say that it needs to be cleaned up a bit. It seemed to me to be just a pile of sentences ...

Hey everyone. I'm new to this forum so I might as well introduce myself. I'm Khimera9, and I'm a new writer on the block. I've been writing for a little ...